I liked the magic reveal.
For a more detailed opinion look somewhere else. I'm clearly not your person.
Oh. I hadn't realised it was written by the author of [b:Wager of Battle|20637464|Wager of Battle|Destina|https://s.gr-assets.com/assets/nophoto/book/50x75-673c574e721a5d4c3fd6e25b74d42bf2.png|39926912]. I should have. It gave me the same feeling, honestly. There's nothing wrong
with it, it's just the author's writing and me are not quite compatible. I don't dislike it, but I don't really like it either. It happens quite rarely, for which I'm grateful.